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Flash Reviews: 151
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151 Reviews | 39 w/ Responses
Assuming that you're trying to approximate reality as closely as possible, you need to move the left arm to a lower layer so that his left hand doesn't pop out between the bottom hem of his shirt and the top of this pants when he walks toward the can.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I had totally missed that. Thanks!
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Bad sound does detract from an otherwise nice flash. Put the following code on buttons that select incorrect answers:
on(release) {
stopAllSounds();
}
(as well as other commands you already have on the buttons)
Author's Response:
Thanks. how do i re-open my flash?
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"english subtitles would really help"
Someone who can't read German might pick up on the basic gist of this flash, but it would help if there were English subtitles.
(Und, ja, ich lese die deutsche Sprache).
Author's Response:
Yes you are right; Problem is, that it took a very long time to get it done already and it already had it own website (with its own domain), which was hacked and deleted within 2 weeks by people who obviously didn't want the content to be shown to everyone. I hope that newgrounds won't be that easy to hack. It will take a while to get it subtitled but I will try whenever I have time in between.
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I'd agree with the previous reviewer, though, that it isn't necessary to have the intro up for quite so long.
I'll try the code for having a sound play when a button is pressed.
Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thanks, for your review, I'll take the "A Lockdue Production" thing into mind for my next flash, thanks for being honest.
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Isn't a picture depicting someone giving fellatio considered hardcore porn? I'm referring to picture number 2.
Author's Response:
No?
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was there a point?
Author's Response:
The point was to waste your time! MISSION ACCOMPLISHED :D
Seriously though if a flash needed to have a plot or point to be declared good by all, then Numa Numa wouldnt have ever gotten through the portal. So if you dont like it guess what? Others might :D
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"all mistakes should be so enjoyable"
I especially liked the sound.
Author's Response:
tyvm but you need to vote 0
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the actionscript needs some fine tuning.
For instance, the head's y-scale can be increased to the
point that it potentially blocks access to the button that
decreases it, so if the player wants to make it smaller he's out
of luck. The script should be changed so that the changed
head doesn't block the buttons, or else the buttons should
be moved to a place where they won't be blocked.
Author's Response:
That's not a problem with actionscript, I just needed to put the buttons on a layer higher than the guy's head, which I have now done and updated the file. Thankyou for the review.
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Graphics were well done, audio wasn't muddy and it had a plot of
sorts. I actually know someone who called a suicide hotline and
got put on hold, so it's believeable. Suggestion for improvement:
Try to make it more humorous and/or a tad faster paced.
Also, don't make a bid for putting it on the frontpage in your author comments since around here that's more likely to lessen the chances of it actually happening.
Author's Response:
Lol thanks a lot. Your a nice guy. Lol haha ill learn next time bout tha frontpage thing. Lol yeah i agree it was quite long winded but thanks anyway.
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This would make a nice card for sending to people in general if
there was some way to personalize it (i.e., make is so the sender
could change the name of Sarah to something else).
Author's Response:
Since the sender is me, I can easily change the name. I dont intend to give it out to other people to send customized to someone else, but maybe if they asked nicely..
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