BurningRiverStudio's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[An ArchonClock Collection]

if you're open to suggestions

mini flash movies that continuously loop and are
too small to really have a plot are much funnier
and more interesting to a viewer if they have
easter eggs in them. I liked the pirate piece
the best. It would have been more fun, though,
if the clocks did *something* different when i
rolled the mouse cursor over them. They could
jump into the air, say something, brandish a
sword.....get the idea?

ArchonClock responds:

Good idea!
This movie has 3 easter eggs, but none are seen in any of the Loops.

[Mad Libs 1]

not bad

Overall good. Some suggestions though:
1. Since it looks rather lame to have a word
cut off or to have the period of a sentence
way out like this comma , you
might suggest minimum/maximum number of letters
for the words the user types in. Either that or
format the text in such a way as to make the
spacing automatically correct.

2. If you want a challenge, set up a script that
determines whether to use "a" or "an" in front
of the inputted word.

UnsidedSoftware responds:

I would do all that, but I don't have enough Flash skills to know how to do that.

[SIAH Build a Character]

overall ok

I like it, but can you expand on it?
For instance, once the character has been built,
can you have hir perform activities?

moe-hawkins responds:

no i dont think so. it would be really hard and ide need a really good script, and plus it would take forever to do it for every combination of pieces.