BurningRiverStudio's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A present for you]

Nice.

It's good to see flash on NG that isn't all about gore or sex. The images were nice and the animation was smooth (always nice to see good animation). One question- why couldn't the son give his father both the gift he had brought AND the hug?

Diives responds:

Well, the true is, it was for the twist, and for show the true meaning of Christmas most stronger. if he gives the gift to his father, and the hug, the meaning maybe would not show so strong.

Thanks for the comment :)
Happy christmas :)!

[Definitely Not Beer]

Since you seem to want feedback

Assuming that you're trying to approximate reality as closely as possible, you need to move the left arm to a lower layer so that his left hand doesn't pop out between the bottom hem of his shirt and the top of this pants when he walks toward the can.

nal1200 responds:

Yeah, I had totally missed that. Thanks!

[crispy bangs]

impressive

Good animation, good choice of music (it would be nice to know the origin of the sound file, though). I look forward to see the continuation of this.

CrispyBangs responds:

secret of mana - the oracle

[Godless - Hope Dies Last]

english subtitles would really help

Someone who can't read German might pick up on the basic gist of this flash, but it would help if there were English subtitles.
(Und, ja, ich lese die deutsche Sprache).

JerUSalem responds:

Yes you are right; Problem is, that it took a very long time to get it done already and it already had it own website (with its own domain), which was hacked and deleted within 2 weeks by people who obviously didn't want the content to be shown to everyone. I hope that newgrounds won't be that easy to hack. It will take a while to get it subtitled but I will try whenever I have time in between.

[CoolDrMoney vs Bubble gum]

plot?

was there a point?

CoolDrMoney responds:

The point was to waste your time! MISSION ACCOMPLISHED :D

Seriously though if a flash needed to have a plot or point to be declared good by all, then Numa Numa wouldnt have ever gotten through the portal. So if you dont like it guess what? Others might :D

[my first falsh vote 0]

all mistakes should be so enjoyable

I especially liked the sound.

HydraulicCat responds:

tyvm but you need to vote 0

[The Aunt Wound's Return]

on the whole quite entertaining

The only thing i'd suggest is that the English subtitles be edited;
the joke about Captain Yankee isn't as good with the poor English.

Otherwise this is an excellent flash.

artecartum responds:

It's a joke about an american super hero who tries to work by a junior hero in Brazil. Sorry about the english... LOL.

[The Suicide Hotline]

on the whole not bad

Graphics were well done, audio wasn't muddy and it had a plot of
sorts. I actually know someone who called a suicide hotline and
got put on hold, so it's believeable. Suggestion for improvement:
Try to make it more humorous and/or a tad faster paced.

Also, don't make a bid for putting it on the frontpage in your author comments since around here that's more likely to lessen the chances of it actually happening.

Goshmo responds:

Lol thanks a lot. Your a nice guy. Lol haha ill learn next time bout tha frontpage thing. Lol yeah i agree it was quite long winded but thanks anyway.

[Birthday card for Sarah]

not bad

This would make a nice card for sending to people in general if
there was some way to personalize it (i.e., make is so the sender
could change the name of Sarah to something else).

Lambi responds:

Since the sender is me, I can easily change the name. I dont intend to give it out to other people to send customized to someone else, but maybe if they asked nicely..

[Dancing Pig]

suggestion....

This would have worked better as an interactive game than a
movie. Can you set this up so that the view can choose which
move the pig uses?

sparkers responds:

yea, but I suck at actionscripting.