BurningRiverStudio's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hardball 02 Improved]

OK, but...

...the text is very hard to read.

123456789qwerty responds:

so? Thx for the review

[Spoilt Brat!]

not complete

I can see that you've put time into this, but
it doesn't seem to work. Once an item is selected
there doesn't seem to be any way to actually
work with it.

[Master Mind 1.5]

there's something missing

According to the instructions, one checks one's
guess by pressing 'set' (or is it 'get'?).
Where, pray tell, is that button? Without that
button, the game is effectively broken.
If the 'set' was somewhere obvious, i would have
given you a MUCH higher score for this game.

[Pumped pong]

a suggestion

When the person misses the ball, rather than
jumping immediately to the frame with the replay
button, have the replay button appear on the scene
with the games score so that a person has at
least a second to look at it, or else make the
score appear on the frame that has the replay
button.

[Stick Figure Suicide]

hot diggity

Great movie. Only missing method would have been
to have stick drink some poison, turn strange
psychedelic colors, puff up, and then explode
on the top of the cliff.

Again, GREAT movie.

[Goth Chick Dress Up]

a suggestion

Include a pair of ballet shoes, if you don't
think that's too much associated with the
fetish scene. Maybe give her a flourescent green
stick to hold instead of the lollipop (choice
between stick and candy).

This is one of the better dressup games i've
seen on NG.

Ravertyke responds:

As far as the fetish thing, I was kinda going in that direction when i made it. But, What is the significance of the green stick? sorry

[An ArchonClock Collection]

if you're open to suggestions

mini flash movies that continuously loop and are
too small to really have a plot are much funnier
and more interesting to a viewer if they have
easter eggs in them. I liked the pirate piece
the best. It would have been more fun, though,
if the clocks did *something* different when i
rolled the mouse cursor over them. They could
jump into the air, say something, brandish a
sword.....get the idea?

ArchonClock responds:

Good idea!
This movie has 3 easter eggs, but none are seen in any of the Loops.

[Mad Libs 1]

not bad

Overall good. Some suggestions though:
1. Since it looks rather lame to have a word
cut off or to have the period of a sentence
way out like this comma , you
might suggest minimum/maximum number of letters
for the words the user types in. Either that or
format the text in such a way as to make the
spacing automatically correct.

2. If you want a challenge, set up a script that
determines whether to use "a" or "an" in front
of the inputted word.

UnsidedSoftware responds:

I would do all that, but I don't have enough Flash skills to know how to do that.