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OK, but...

...the text is very hard to read.

123456789qwerty responds:

so? Thx for the review

not complete

I can see that you've put time into this, but
it doesn't seem to work. Once an item is selected
there doesn't seem to be any way to actually
work with it.

nice, but....

it's not a game or a movie. Really nice graphics,
nice sound, and it serves its purpose as an intro
to your site, but if you want comments, it would
make a bit more sense to solicit feedback on the
BBS rather than submitting this to the portal.

there's something missing

According to the instructions, one checks one's
guess by pressing 'set' (or is it 'get'?).
Where, pray tell, is that button? Without that
button, the game is effectively broken.
If the 'set' was somewhere obvious, i would have
given you a MUCH higher score for this game.

a suggestion

When the person misses the ball, rather than
jumping immediately to the frame with the replay
button, have the replay button appear on the scene
with the games score so that a person has at
least a second to look at it, or else make the
score appear on the frame that has the replay
button.

finished?

It feels like it isn't finished. I know you say it's based on Dr. Seuss, but i think it might be
worthwhile to depart from the story this is
based on and add some more options, extending
the parts of the house that he explores.

hot diggity

Great movie. Only missing method would have been
to have stick drink some poison, turn strange
psychedelic colors, puff up, and then explode
on the top of the cliff.

Again, GREAT movie.

a suggestion

Include a pair of ballet shoes, if you don't
think that's too much associated with the
fetish scene. Maybe give her a flourescent green
stick to hold instead of the lollipop (choice
between stick and candy).

This is one of the better dressup games i've
seen on NG.

Ravertyke responds:

As far as the fetish thing, I was kinda going in that direction when i made it. But, What is the significance of the green stick? sorry

if you're open to suggestions

mini flash movies that continuously loop and are
too small to really have a plot are much funnier
and more interesting to a viewer if they have
easter eggs in them. I liked the pirate piece
the best. It would have been more fun, though,
if the clocks did *something* different when i
rolled the mouse cursor over them. They could
jump into the air, say something, brandish a
sword.....get the idea?

ArchonClock responds:

Good idea!
This movie has 3 easter eggs, but none are seen in any of the Loops.

not bad

Overall good. Some suggestions though:
1. Since it looks rather lame to have a word
cut off or to have the period of a sentence
way out like this comma , you
might suggest minimum/maximum number of letters
for the words the user types in. Either that or
format the text in such a way as to make the
spacing automatically correct.

2. If you want a challenge, set up a script that
determines whether to use "a" or "an" in front
of the inputted word.

UnsidedSoftware responds:

I would do all that, but I don't have enough Flash skills to know how to do that.

"Being did not grow into plurality; its very unity was a plurality; but plurality implies Difference, and unity-in-plurality involves Identity." --Plotinus

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