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[Iori Interactive Fighter]

not bad

Graphics are very nice, but it would be good if
the character could do a little more. By that i
mean there should be more to do than press
different buttons to cause the character to go
through certain motions...there should be a
storyline or something the character needs to
accomplish. The button in the lower left hand
corner of the window, btw, caused the error
message "File couldn't be found." to appear.

[lord ofthe cornflakes beg]

a few suggestions

1.The dialogue is muddy and if you can make the
sound on them cleaner that would help.

2.Don't make the movie loop.

And why is this classified as a game? There's no
interactivity. This should have been classified
as a movie.

[BANG!! Wheeeeeee...]

a suggestion

for the teletubbie and bunny fields, a point and
click interactivity like that for the chicken
field would be better; it's intuitivly more
obvious. Either that or provide a menu that is
more detailed as to what the various keys do
when you press them.

This wouldn't make a bad addition to the assassin
collection.

[SIAH Build a Character]

overall ok

I like it, but can you expand on it?
For instance, once the character has been built,
can you have hir perform activities?

moe-hawkins responds:

no i dont think so. it would be really hard and ide need a really good script, and plus it would take forever to do it for every combination of pieces.

[Build a Mecha]

needs work

For any given option, it looks like a person can
only run through the choices once, and then one
is stuck with whatever happens to be the last
choice offered. A person should be able to browse
through the options as often as desired, going
back to a previous possibility if that's more
interesting.

Oh, and you've submitted this game twice to the
portal under similar names. Don't do that.

[Ping-Pong-NPL150-2]

suggestions

IN addition to what zenithscope wrote, you need
to make the window for the score larger; when
pc has gotten more than 99 points and the score
for it is 100 or higher, the last digit is
partially cut off.

One possible option you might consider is giving
the person playing the option of setting the
maximum number of points either side can reach
(i.e., determine when the game is over instead of
going on and on and on and on....)

This is one of the better games i've seen in the
portal recently.

[Zepher Box]

instructions?

For those who haven't a clue what a
'zepher box' is, you should include instructions
as to how to play.

[Optical illusions (roxer)]

some points to consider

Nice illusions, but i'd like to suggest revisions
to the movie's structure. Label the 'replay'
button. Most people will recognize the arrow
for what it is, but it would be helpful to label
it so there's no mistaking it for anything else.

Since these are static illusions, you might
consider keeping the 'next' button but also having
the movie move on to the next picture after a
couple of minutes or so if the viewer doesn't use
the button...otherwise why bother with the flash
format when a bunch of html pages would do what
you've created here?

[ERNIE-AID v.1.1]

The point? Does he want the cash or not?

This sort of game makes more sense if the object
is to hit what pops up from the hole before it
vanishes again. The idea of giving cash to a
panhandler who doesn't sit still for two seconds
is strange...makes me want to just sit there and
watch the character starve to death.