pointing at the moon i like it
It would be improved if there was animation instead of a series of
still shots, but as is it's OK.
i like it
It would be improved if there was animation instead of a series of
still shots, but as is it's OK.
on the whole not bad
Graphics were well done, audio wasn't muddy and it had a plot of
sorts. I actually know someone who called a suicide hotline and
got put on hold, so it's believeable. Suggestion for improvement:
Try to make it more humorous and/or a tad faster paced.
Also, don't make a bid for putting it on the frontpage in your author comments since around here that's more likely to lessen the chances of it actually happening.
Lol thanks a lot. Your a nice guy. Lol haha ill learn next time bout tha frontpage thing. Lol yeah i agree it was quite long winded but thanks anyway.
not bad
This would make a nice card for sending to people in general if
there was some way to personalize it (i.e., make is so the sender
could change the name of Sarah to something else).
Since the sender is me, I can easily change the name. I dont intend to give it out to other people to send customized to someone else, but maybe if they asked nicely..
my kind of movie
Great in just about every way. Hope to see more of your work.
made me laugh
which is hard to do these days. Thanks.
I like this alot
This, or something like it, would be a nice addition to the tutorial
section. If you could modify this to make it an explicit tutorial,
that would be even better.
nice debut
You've got promise.
suggestion....
This would have worked better as an interactive game than a
movie. Can you set this up so that the view can choose which
move the pig uses?
yea, but I suck at actionscripting.
quite good.
about the only thing i can think of that would make it more fun
would be to have made some easter eggs (e.g. let the viewer pick
an apple from the tree and throw it at one of the characters, have
the character react if it gets hit by the apple).
ok, but....
On the whole OK, and the change of gags with each replay is
different, but the transition from one scene to the next is at times
very choppy. A day in the life of a robot plumber might also be
a tad more interesting to watch if it was a bit longer so as to
allow better plot development.
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