pretty good
Since you asked for suggestions for improvement,
try to keep the camera a tad more steady, or else
make the stick figure graphic stay in one place
relative to the wall when that camera jiggles.
pretty good
Since you asked for suggestions for improvement,
try to keep the camera a tad more steady, or else
make the stick figure graphic stay in one place
relative to the wall when that camera jiggles.
nice
krinkels should be flattered.
yes..been looking a lot at his stuff. It's so detailed..didn't really appreciate how hard it would be till i had a crack at it. It's the old 'no arms just hands' trick he uses..fiendishly clever..really expressive and yet cuts right down on animation..
something different
It's not everyday i see a movie where the cop
speaks into his radio, and then walks outside of
the scene...with his hand still holding the
radio transmitter in the lower right corner of
the screen when the rest of him is long gone.
Adds a certain surreal touch to it.
Sound would prolly be improved if the microphone
wasn't held so close to the mouth when dubbing.
composition needs work
Don't make objects the same color as the
background. Black staff against a black
background is poor planning.
you rock
if you're not a professional at this, you
should be.
good job
Liked it all. It could have even been made
longer.
Glad you liked the soundfile i made enough to
use it. Thanx.
Any longer and I probably would have abandoned it lol. Fantastic sound file btw
one of the longest things i've seen on NG
Without a doubt, one of the longest playing
movies i've seen. It was also one of the slowest
paced i've ever seen. Nice to see something with
a plot, but it really needs to be tightened up
a bit. For example, you can dispense with about
7 of the "damns" when Jason shows up at the party.
overall good,...
...but i think you meant that they survived an
'explosion', not an 'exploitation'.
Of course i could be wrong about that.
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